Title: His Possession
Author: Sam Crescent
Publisher: Evernight Publishing
Buy Link: Buy His Posession Here!
Rating: 
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Reviewed By: Donna
Blurb:
The Owners, 1
Cadeon Ashwood is a dominant man who has one problem: he’s overly possessive. When he meets Violet Moore for the first time, he knows she is the woman for him. The possessive instinct she stirs within him can only mean one thing—she will be the woman who owns his heart.
Violet is a shy young woman who is trying to make her way in the world, but she has a dark past filled with shame. She is constantly looking over her shoulder.
When Cadeon sees an opportunity to get close to the younger woman, he takes it with everything he’s got. She drives him crazy with the way she bows her head, and her innocent blushing makes Cadeon want her more.
For too long she’s lived without love and safety. Cadeon offers her everything, but will she live long enough to enjoy it?
Be Warned: light BDSM, spanking.
Review:
I was very intrigued by the theme of this book… Possessiveness of a man for his woman, combined with a controlling dominant streak, is like playing with a ticking time bomb…exhilarating and nerve-wracking at the same time. There is a lot of potential here, and the overall theme of the story was very imaginative and interesting. The characters had some really good potential, too. I was not impressed, however, with the writing style and editing (or lack thereof) of the book. Almost every page had some form of poor grammar or typo. Some of the errors could have been corrected easily with a simple read through of the book. Others should have been caught by spell-check.
There are a lot of loose ends and trails that the author can follow in sequel to this book. I hope that in doing so that more editing will be insisted upon prior to publication. Again, the plot and theme of the book are highly imaginative and compelling… I just wish it had been cleaned up a bit.
