Review – Swords of the Horseclans By Robert Adams

Swords_of_the_HorseclansTitle: Swords of the Horseclans

Author: Robert Adams

Publisher: Mundania Press

Buy Link: Buy Swords of the Horseclans Here!

Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ Leave it on the Shelf

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

The blood-soaked blade of war.

For seven hundred years, the Undying High Lord Milo has been building his Confederation, leading the Horseclans slowly across the lands once known as the United States, absorbing city-states and nomadic tribes alike, some by peaceful means, some by the sword

But now his enemies have banded together into an army far larger than Milo can muster. Led by an ancient and evil intelligence, this wave of unstoppable destruction is thundering swiftly down upon the Confederation forces.

And Milo has no choice but to call upon all his allies, from the smallest troop of mountain warriors to the notorious pirate ships of the Lord of the Sea Isles, in a final desperate attempt to save the Confederation from seemingly certain doom…

Review:

This author seems to have a good pedigree in the industry, so I decided to give Robert Adams a shot. And, while I generally am able to give most authors a fair chance, I had to admit failure with this novel. Yes, I do read military SF and fantasy from time to time. And that’s not the problem with this novel. It’s the author’s style, which is unnecessarily wordy, verging on purple.

Viewpoint provided a massive stumbling block. Adams moves readers from character to character when and how it’s convenient for him to tell the story. To the point where it’s impossible to relate to any of the characters nor keep track of who says or does what.

Unpronounceable names left my head spinning. Story arcs are scattered haphazardly, with little rhyme or reason. Dialogue smatters of “As you know, Bob” type telling. Let me not even get started on the way women are represented.

The only aspect of the writing that was mildly interesting was the military strategy. But then to be honest, there are dozens of military writers who’ve got a stronger handle on characterization, dialogue and narrative structure who’re worth reading again and again than staggering through this work. I wanted to like Adams’s writing, but yeah, this one didn’t work out like I’d hoped. It might be a fault of the reader but in this novel’s case I think the target market would have to be die-hard fans. And I’m sure they’re out there.

Review – Blood of the Vines by Ann Cory

Title: Blood of the Vines

Author: Ann Cory

Publisher: Liquid Silver Books

Buy Link: Buy Blood Of The Vines Here!

Rating: ★★★☆☆ You Want to Read

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

Vampire Hunter: Book One – Blood of the Vines

Once a vampire, now a vampire hunter, Regan Fellows walks a fine line with her reputation. Unable to afford her favorite Italian leather outfits, she takes any job she’s offered. When the owner of The Vines, a popular nightclub, asks her to investigate strange occurrences within her establishment, her investigation takes a disturbing turn. As Regan explores the labyrinth of rooms within The Vines, she discovers blood-filled carboys, discarded bodies, and shadows that follow her every move. But they aren’t the only problems.

Sexy bartender, Garrett Reynolds is a bona-fide distraction, and flawless at the art of breaking down her resistance. Even in the midst of tracking a ruthless horde of vampires, Regan can’t deny him. And that attraction puts her in more danger than any job she ever accepted.

Review:

First off, this is a great, hot and fast little read. I never do get tired of the vampire or vampire hunter as a trope in fiction. Regan is a sassy woman in control of her life and she’s not afraid to indulge herself when there’s a hunky piece of manflesh offering himself to her. And Garrett is clearly captivated by her, and the chemistry between the two is definitely enough to readers fan themselves.

All this being said, I did have some issues with the story. The writing comes across as rushed, and often in action sequences I was left wondering, “Huh, how did that happen?” The world-building hints at some sort of semi-dystopian future, and it’s fine to leave readers wondering, but I did feel there could have been a better indication of Regan’s worldview.

While I don’t have issues reading action-driven paranormal romance that ramp up the erotic elements, I do feel that attention does need to be given to the narrative, with more than just a little bit of a coat-hanger of a plot as a backdrop for the sex. And Blood of the Vines lets me down in the narrative structure. There were times when I felt Regan was almost too stupid to live with regard to mixing her love-making with a potentially dangerous situation.

Don’t get me wrong, the sex was mind-blowing, and Cory writes awesome heat, but I felt that the scenes were a bit contrived and the plot limped along, with a too-convenient resolution. My final verdict: if you’re looking for a quick diversion with some super-charged erotic elements and a vampire-flavored theme, this is a fun, hot read. If you’re looking for something with a little more substance, you might be disappointed.

Review – Hey Dorothy You’re Not in Kansas Anymore By Karen Mueller Bryson

Title: Hey Dorothy You’re Not in Kansas Anymore

Author: Karen Mueller Bryson

Publisher: eBookit.com

Buy Link: Buy Hey Dorothy You’re Not in Kansas Anymore Here!

Rating: ★★★☆☆ You Want To Read

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

Dorothy Gale Robinson, an aspiring actress, is the daughter of hippie parents with a passion for old movies. When her father is killed suddenly while sipping a non-fat decaf mocha latte at a local coffee shop, Dorothy’s life is turned upside down. After an unconventional dispersing of her father’s ashes at the Universal Studios’ Psycho House, Dorothy’s mother decides to sell all her worldly possessions and join a New Age cult headquartered in Banff, Canada. Of course, Dorothy’s twin brother, Jude, is too busy with his law firm to help Dorothy save their mother from the clutches of the sinister cult, so she seeks the aid of her new boyfriend, Lahrs, and a cult-buster, Mervyn O’Roy, who just happens to look like Mickey Rooney. The motley trio venture from Florida to Banff, in search of Dorothy’s mother and a little romance in the Canadian Rockies.

Review:

Dorothy’s parents had a bit of a fixation with the Wizard of Oz—hence her name—but her life is about to be turned upside down after her father is killed in freak accident in a coffee shop. What follows is a sometimes poignant but mainly humorous slice of life that follows a coming of age scenario for the protagonist.

Dorothy’s mother gets involved in some sort of New Age cult and Dorothy, aided by the new beau in her life as well as a cult-buster, embark on a trip to Canada to intervene. To be honest, there isn’t much in the way of conflict in this novel, but its quirkiness makes up for this lack of tension. What I did enjoy was Dorothy’s very personable voice. I felt like I was sitting in the room listening to her share her doings—as if she was a close girlfriend. The dialogue is snappy and I smiled a bit while I read.

My overall feeling is that there’s not a helluva lot of substance to this offering, but if you’re looking for a quirky, amusing read, Hey Dorothy You’re Not in Kansas Anymore should appeal. It’s a light-hearted recounting of a woman’s reality check that should be worth a few quiet chuckles.

Review – Heart and Fire by Wendy L Callahan

Title: Heart and Fire

Author: Wendy L Callahan

Publisher: Eternal Press

Buy Link: Buy Heart And Fire Here!

Rating: ★★★☆☆ You Want to Read

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

Courtesan. Secret agent. Tea-drinker.

Courtesan and gunslinging government agent, Saville Cantall has just been thrust into an untenable position. She has been ordered to work as bodyguard to the woman who just replaced her as the king’s mistress.

Frustrated by, not just the situation, but her own tenuous place in society, Saville finds her problems compounded by the question of who would want to harm the king’s new mistress.

Over the course of the summer, she learns that time is running out to stop a war, learn the secret of her magickal abilities, and fend off two persistent suitors… While somehow still finding the time to sit down for afternoon tea.

Review:

Wendy L Callahan certainly delivers when she introduces us to her feisty Saville Cantall who, for five years not only protected her king, but served as his mistress. As secret agent, she’s prepared to lay down her life for her country, and has no time for romance. Nevertheless, she can’t help but feel just that little bit hard done by when her king *does* set her aside for another woman. And of course the man being a bit of a right tosser, in my opinion, doesn’t exactly do it in the nicest possible way.

So, I totally understand *why* she’s miffed. But Saville does the right thing. After throwing a bit of a hissy fit she sucks it up and gets on with her life, or at least tries to. Because then her king, pulls the worst stunt imaginable. He expects her to act as bodyguard to the new woman.

Yeah, I’d be pretty pissed too, and admit when I saw this as the hook to the novel, that I really had to read it to see what would happen next. And Callhan delivers a wonderful first-person narrative. I really got into Saville. I loved her spunk and her character.

There were a few bits that annoyed me, which I often find with fantasy and/or steampunk novels, and here I’m afraid Callahan *is* guilty, in that she shoehorns in a bit too much exposition at the start. Items such as the goggles—which I know are de rigueur for popular steampunk McGuffins, seemed a bit too convenient. Ditto for the clockwork butterfly. It really served no purpose other than set dressing and, although a pretty trinket in the tale, did little to progress the plot.

Another aspect of her writing that did set my hackles up a little was that I would have liked to see clarity in Saville’s motivations in a few of the parts where the narrative seemed a bit fast. Some tensions and dynamics could have been developed further, but overall, I engaged with the story and could overlook these little quibbles.

What Callahan does well with this novel is a nice bit of misdirection with regard to the eventual love interest. She succeeds admirably in deflecting the expected trope of the love triangle, then succeeds in maintaining simmering tension.

In conclusion, Callahan writes a wonderful, swashbuckling tale featuring a smart-mouthed, sassy heroine that, if you’re a fan of the type of action provided in films like Pirates of the Caribbean, you’ll most likely latch onto this fast-paced fun read and relish it down to the very last page—action and court intrigue, with a dash of romance and oodles of attitude.

Review – Ever Together by Margie L Miller

Title: Ever Together

Author: Margie L. Miller

Publisher: The Wild Rose Press

Buy Link: Buy Ever Together Here!

Rating: ★★★★☆ You Need to Read

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

Convenience store clerk, Katy Simms has got to be the only woman in North America who hasn’t heard of megastar Derrick Nelson, which makes her boarding house the perfect place for him to recover from a nervous breakdown. When he stumbles into her life one summer night, all Katy sees is a unemployed drifter named Caleb who needs a couple of decent meals and some human compassion. Her presence calms his soul, while his patience lifts her confidence.
Together, they are more, but will Caleb’s fame and Katy’s generous nature drive a wedge between two people who were meant to be…ever together?

Review:

Although this is a time-worn concept where a clueless individual falls for the famous person who’s slumming things, Miller handles this story in a very engaging way. Although Katy’s naivete does make her a bit cloyingly sweet as a character, I couldn’t help be won over by her good nature.

So far as sweet romance goes, Miller does a sterling job to present a feel-good story with a cast of characters who are well defined. I felt like I was being offered a slice of life that contrasts nicely with the everyday grind. There is no doom and gloom in Ever Together.

The only reason the story doesn’t get a “gotta read” rating from me is because there were moments where I felt I needed to know more about the characters’ motivations for behaving in a certain fashion. I’d also like to have seen less of a Deus ex Machina twist near the end, but other than that, kudos to Miller for keeping me turning pages right until the last words.

Katy has to learn to risk her heart and see that the very qualities she thinks aren’t glamorous are exactly the reasons why Caleb/Derrick falls for her. Caleb/Derrick is looking for heart’s rest from a hectic schedule–and he finds it with Katy, if she’ll have him.

I found the fact that she was ignorant of his celeb status until quite far in the story quite adorable, and Miller plays it out nicely.

Ever Together is a lovely tale that will leave you feeling warm and fuzzy afterward.

Review – Wild Arcana by Lux Zakari

Title: Wild Arcana

Author: Lux Zakari

Publisher: Smashwords – Self-Published

Buy link: Buy Wild Arcana Here!

Rating: ★★★★★ You Gotta Read

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

Five friends. One tarot card reading. Zero expectations—until fate stepped in.

SHANE, the movie star. He arrives at a rehabilitation clinic for his sex addiction only to be enticed in ways he never thought possible…
TREY, the contractor. He looks after his friend’s deeply troubled stepsister under the guise of remodeling his New York City high-rise, but soon faces temptations that test the bonds of friendship and his self-control…
KRI, the Japanese heiress. Regrets haunt her when she learns she’s pregnant and must leave her lover at the insistence of her strict, traditional father…
BRAND, the high-profile drug dealer. He wrestles with demons of his own after his boyfriend—a cop—ends their relationship over his questionable career path…
DISA, the wayward tennis player. She has her sights set on talk show host Jules Rohan with no idea just how much truth lies in his bad-boy reputation…

Their journey through the twenty-two cards of the Major Arcana in this high-society erotic novel reveals that nothing in life is left to chance—and they’re more entangled in each other’s lives than they ever could have imagined.

Review:

There’s a character for everyone in this sexually charged tale. First off, well done for Zakari for creating five well-realized characters who step off the pages right into my heart. Everyone is the master of his or her own fate, and though they make poor choices that leave them entangled and floundering, I was left breathless in anticipation to see what would happen next.

In addition, Zakari has succeeded in the somewhat daunting task of balancing out such diverse characters, weaving their fates together seamlessly while making me care about each of them to the point where I wasn’t certain who was my favorite.

Wild Arcana is an exploration of the complex relationships people have, be it friends or lovers. Each character is deliciously flawed with a complex outlook on life, which makes his or her journey to resolution all the more poignant.

Shane won’t admit to himself that he has a sex addiction, and he meets his match in a steamy online relationship while he’s supposed to be in recovery. He quickly discovers there’s more to life than the next shag, but what about love?

Trey lives in the shadow of a failed relationship and when his best friend’s sister leads him into temptation, he must decide between honor and his heart’s desire. And the woman he sets his sights on is brittle, and he doesn’t know where he stands with her.

Kri’s wealthy father holds her purse strings, and he’s less than enthusiastic about her relationship with a photographer. She must choose between her heart and the outreach program her father’s money finances.

Brand knows he can’t carry on with his lifestyle as it is, even more so when he is forced to decide between his income and the love of his life. And fate deals him a bad hand before he finds resolution.

Disa thinks she’s in control of her sexcapades but she might have bitten off more than she could chew in the events that transpire. Her growing realization is especially poignant when she hits rock bottom.

And that’s the rub. All the characters reach a nadir before they can get their somewhat bittersweet happy endings. The five viewpoint characters are served their just deserts in a thoroughly satisfying way, and in some cases with highly unexpected outcomes.

I can’t sing Zakari’s praises enough. This is one of the best indie reads I’ve encountered this year. Her setting and characters are so breathtakingly real it’s like watching a film as the stories unfold. Not to mention that her prose is sparkling. Read this book. The narrative is sensual and engages you until the last page has turned.

Review – The Graveyard Gymnasium by Kelly Lougheed

Title: The Graveyard Gymnasium

Author: Kelly Lougheed

Publisher: Mundania Press

Buy Link: Buy The Graveyard Gymnasium Here!

Rating: ★★★★☆ You Need to Read

Reviewed By: Nerine

Blurb:

It’s difficult to be a rebel at an all-girls boarding school like Hawthorn, but Charity Hooper tries her hardest, smuggling food into the library and favoring CliffsNotes over boring volumes of literature. In fact, if Hawthorn weren’t an all-girls school, she feels certain she would be having a tempestuous affair with a dangerous rogue who copied all his math homework answers from the back of the book.

When Hawthorn hosts a band of exchange students from Romania, Charity knows this is her shot at a tempestuous affair. But after she witnesses an exchange student slurping her roommate’s blood one night, she realizes that the Romanians would be less interested in kissing her than in biting her head off. And the Romanians aren’t the only vampires lurking on campus, either–according to an old inscription in the school gymnasium, a legion of vampires lie buried alive beneath it.

Does she dare confide in the English teacher she wishes were her BFF, Ms. Van Tessel, who mysteriously saved Charity’s bitten roommate with a blood transfusion? But why did Ms. Van Tessel have blood in her mini-fridge in the first place? Can Charity even trust her?

Review:

This novel is a refreshing humor-filled take on the standard boarding school urban fantasy romp with fangs. Lougheed’s style is reminiscent of classic Sue Townsend, with Charity coming across as a delightfully ditzy Adrian Mole-type character–with a lot more sass and sex appeal.

Although there were a few rough spots in the narrative where I felt Lougheed wrote a bit fast and could have clarified her characters’ motivations a bit better, the overall story is a fast-paced, action-packed romp that often had me laughing out loud and recalling my own high school years–so a big thumbs up for the author on that part.

Charity lets the act of slacking sink to new and despairing levels but in such a way that one can’t help but cheer her on. She takes all the supernatural occurrences in her stride with often hilarious commentary.

If you’re looking for a funny, imaginative read that pokes plenty of sticks at the types of stories currently popular that take themselves far too seriously, go read this story. Lougheed tells a fantastic story in more ways than one.

Review – The Cure By Susan Phelan

Title: The Cure

Author: Susan Phelan

Publisher: Ellora’s Cave

Buy Link: Buy The Cure Here!

Rating: ★★★★☆ You Need to Read

Reviewed By: Nerine Dorman

Blurb:

Chancella Tremaine, a respected cellular biologist, has willfully sacrificed any sort of personal life in her quest to unravel the mystery of vampirism and the secret to restoring mortal life. Having just penned a book on the subject, Chancella finds she has attracted quite a bit of attention, but no one could have guessed what her controversial reanimation theory would lure out of the shadows…

World-weary vampire Valian de Mortenoire has been putting one undead foot in front of the other for two hundred years, disillusioned with his much-overrated immortality but unable to get a release from its empty existence. Upon learning of Chancella’s work, he seductively offers himself up as an inhuman specimen and once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to test her hypothesis.

Frightened but intrigued, Chancella’s logical side wins out and she eventually agrees to work with the dangerously attractive Valian. But their arrangement is soon complicated by their mutual attraction to one another, as well as the arrival of Valian’s age-old enemy – the vengeful Jack, who wants Chancella for his own dark intents.

Despite their pain, passion and power, they must have the courage to test and be healed by The Cure.

Review:

While I enjoyed this story immensely, I have to point out two areas that do bother me about Phelan’s writing: her characters’ motivations and her departures into realms of wordiness (with more than one clichéd phrase slipping in too) that could have been reined in by a stronger edit. I’d liked to have had a better idea of why her characters behaved in a certain way and, in fact, the novel could have benefited immensely from development on this count.

Another aspect of the book that I did find a bit annoying was the occasional slip from a deep third-person point of view to omniscient, but that could also be put down to personal taste as a reader.

All this being said, it was the premise of the novel that grabbed me from the start. This isn’t just some Frakenstein doctor-type story. I must admit it’s quite novel to have the promise of mortality being the goal as opposed to its opposite. Also, the cast of characters is varied and given fair airtime in the novel, with the suggestion that they too will eventually have their own tales.

Underpinning all this is the undeniable tension between Valian and Chancella. If you’re looking for a quick read with a more than healthy dose of fang, The Cure is a sensual read with enough thrills.

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